Date: 2007-03-02 05:44 am (UTC)
**lays you down and kisses you deeply**

When you put out, it's goooood baby.

I like the look inside Jack's head and the way he progresses as little pieces fall back into place.

The beginning with it being Daniel rescuing Jack was a nice twist and set up the story nicely.

I have to admit, I liked Jack's struggle in the infirmary when he put Janet on her ass. *g*

And Daniel passing out just as Jack was coming to - evil.

I'm looking forward to more fic (and groping).
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