Catspaw

Hi. Really like this story so far. Your Jack is very believable as you've caught him but taken his 'new' character to believable places. That he and Daniel would fall into the same old patterns is very believable and you've caught the texture of their friendship and their old flirty behavior. This has a hopeful, yet bittersweet feeling throughout that pulls the reader along, not knowing what to hope for, but wanting all the time for them both to find what they want and need. Thanks for sharing.